Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Outline for Essay Number 10

An Outline by Gaelen Frink
Eighth Grade English
Pine Point School
January 25, 2011




Main Point: Circles in To Kill a Mockingbird and in your life
Bell word Again

Paragraph 1
Hook
Comment on the hook
Comment on the hook
Thesis  (with bell word)
Main Point: Circles in To Kill a Mockingbird and in your life
Bell word Again
Paragraph 2
TS Topics in TKAM keep coming up
2 Echo Words  once more, one more time
SD Mockingbirds
        CM Earlier Atticus told Jem not shoot mockingbirds
        CM When Jem and Scout leave for the pageant they hear a mockingbird
SD Loneliness
        CM Dill is lonely because his parents don't love him
        CM Scout is lonely because Jem is too old to hang out with his sister
SD Jem and Scout are curios about Boo
        CM Their curiosity led to finding things in the tree
        CM Scout is curious about the workings of the lady meetings
CS It is amazing how things in the book so far apart are connected in some way
Paragraph 3
TS Skiing and school have schedules that repeat
2 Echo Words Over and over, repeated
SD Every weekend I ski
        CM The same schedule weekend after weekend
        CM Not always things are the same
SD The Friday before the weekend I tune my skis
        CM The same thing just repeated for each ski
        CM The job sometimes gets old because it keeps happening over and over
SD In school every day is almost the same
        CM We get up have classes come home do homework go to bed, then repeat for 5 days
        CM The only thing different is the classes
CS Day in day out we repeat





Paragraph 4
Hook
Echo word
Comment on the hook
Comment on the hook
Re-statement of the thesis

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