Outline for 4-Paragraph Essay
Main Point or Thesis of Essay Dill and his loneliness
Bell word Lonesome
Paragraph 1 -- Opening
Hook Have you have felt so alone even though their are people around you?
Comment on the hook Dill feels this way with his new parents because he is with them but they do not spend time with him
Comment on the hook Have you ever thought there is no one that is as lonely and as Isolated as you?
Thesis (with bell word) Dill feels lonely even though he is around people
Paragraph 2
TS Dill feels lonely when he is around his parents
2 Echo words to be used lonely abandoned
SD Why is Dill feeling abandoned
SD Why is Dill feeling abandoned
CM His parents don't want to spend time with him
CM His parents think he should just play with his toys
Quote They weren't interested in me
SD Dill's dad said that they would make a boat
SD Dill's dad said that they would make a boat
CM They never made it
CM Dill didn't come to Maycomb because of the boat
Quote He just said we would. We never did
CS Dill ran away because he just felt too lonely
Paragraph 3
TS Have you ever felt so lonely that you were friendless to a point of sadness
2 Echo words to be used friendless empty
SD Have you ever felt like people are ignoring you
CM You feel like no one wants to talk to you and that makes you feel very lonely
CM Some people just want to ignore you
SD When you are at places where you don't know anybody
CM You usually don't have fun but be lonely
CM This usually is at parties where you should be having fun
CS I can be lonely sometimes, but it is not any fun
Paragraph 4
Hook Have you have felt so alone even though their are people around you?
Echo word Lonely
Comment on the hook This has happened to Dill
Comment on the hookI know it has happened to me
Re-statement of the thesisDill can be lonely sometimes just as i can be lonely too
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